Is this a student project?
Or is this a revenue generating personal blog?
Or is this a commercial blog?
Curious as to the target audience, aside from the generic 'newbies'.
Write what you know, your journey. Limited though it may be, others will benefit from your experience.
Trying to write as an expert won't make it until you log the time to gain the wisdom, no matter how many folks try to contribute ideas.
Keeping it simple, having a focus, will make a world of difference. Stay away from the history of hammocks unless you're prepared to dig a little deeper. Each paragraph should have a few central points that could literally be bullets, I'm not getting that so far.
Appreciate your efforts, never can have too many primers but the devil is in the details and nuance matters. Example, you can read all you want and watch as many videos you want on lacing in a heel lock on your hiking boots but if they forget to tell you to only pull the laces towards the toes when tightening, they've missed a key component and wasted their time and yours creating said video or writeup. So I'd be inclined to either edit your complete writeup in exhaustive detail ensuring that critical points are covered or again, encourage you to describe your journey. Editing en masse yields cumbersome regurgitation rather than elegant wordsmithing.
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